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Used this on 6 chicks. 1 response was about something else. 1 didn't know English too well and asked me what I said. No response thereafter.

Remaining 4 - silence.

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I don't like this. Not my style.

"A bird just flew into my window. Thought of you." Is better suited for me.

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This line is a little too direct and trying to be funny in my opinion. It sounds like those old pickups lines people used in the 90s

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imo it shouldn't even be tried. its one step from "can I be your bodyguard"...

The frame is that she is rare and then its crude and sexual... that combo is deadly to interest

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You guys are crazy. Yes obviously if you have zero sexual identity with women this will not work. Otherwise it's an absolute crusher

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Marketing and game means know your audience. I'm of the opinion the blanket statement that this is a crusher is flat out wrong. Maybe it's great for you, but among my audience, its would be crazy low percentage txt.

You're sending a mass text to women you haven't fucked before presumably, including those you don't have a ton of traction with.

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Yes don't send it to your sister

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This one sucks imo.

It's predictable and screams 'try hard'.

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" Come round my place, movie and a bottle of red "

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(02-19-2014 06:51 PM)Manwhore Wrote:  Yes don't send it to your sister

Dude, whats your issue? Your response is called a false dilemma.

That text is weak for many reasons. If the target is into you, obvs you can write " are you in the sahara? you're so hot and I'm mighty thirsty!!! <3"

But that's not high percentage shit. Granted I go out with a fair amount of intelligent bitches, but even your average college student is not going to feel positive about it.

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Quote:It's predictable and screams 'try hard'.

Like someone with Asperger's in an era where being socially awkward didn't get you smacked down in 2.3 seconds or less. This sounds like something my friend's tacky ass 50 year old uncle would have said to 17 year old girls at parties when I was in high school, and that was a very long time ago. That kind of bad game gets put in its place nowadays, and rightfully so.

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(02-18-2014 04:54 PM)philly22 Wrote:  This line is a little too direct and trying to be funny in my opinion. It sounds like those old pickups lines people used in the 90s

Good point. We can go even farther back for cheesy pickup lines -- something exemplified by this hit from '79. Full title: "If I Said You Had a Beautiful Body (Would You Hold It Against Me?)."

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I prefer this one:

Quote:Bring da moviez biatch lzolzozozozozozolzlzozazlzlzolzlzozzlzlzolzlzoz

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(02-20-2014 01:09 AM)dreambig Wrote:  I prefer this one:

Quote:Bring da moviez biatch lzolzozozozozozolzlzozazlzlzolzlzozzlzlzolzlzoz

GBFM is absolutely hilarious lol.

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Try this: "I'm a carpenter, and I would like to nail you!"

Report to me in the morning!

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You must be tired.......because you've been running through my mind all day!

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Sounds a bit corny to me, but if it works, who cares.

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(02-21-2014 06:34 AM)BoiBoi Wrote:  Sounds a bit corny to me, but if it works, who cares.

Some out there dismiss MM and other groundbreaking forms of game, but those guys were all about "field testing".

This won't hook. Sadly nydigital tried it.

Are you jamaican, cause ja makin me crazy.

A better mass text, off the top of my head, based on this thread... "whats the worst pickup line you ever heard??"

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Quote:A better mass text, off the top of my head, based on this thread... "whats the worst pickup line you ever heard??"

I still like Roosh's "hey, don't forget to wear those red heels!"

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Might be good on tinder. Otherwise I don't think so.

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Your name must be Visa, cause you're everywhere I want to be.

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I'm like a rubik's cube. The more you play with me, the harder I get.

But seriously, a simple 'let's hang out' would work better.